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just got turnt down from a $5.5k/m apartment in Miami even tho our income is $30k/month 🤷♂️
@shawean
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The video taps into a common frustration and relatable financial struggle, particularly for self-employed individuals, prompting engagement through a direct question seeking advice.
Summary
The creator shares their frustration after being denied a $5.5k/month apartment in Miami, despite earning $30k/month. They are seeking advice on loopholes for self-employed individuals.
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keepin it real always. update turns out we got denied bc we’re self employed and not on salary/W2s 😭 anyone know loop holes??
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