What is this doing in my car?

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Why it worked

The creator uses a relatable and emotionally charged narrative about past relationship struggles, employing sarcasm and direct address to engage the audience. The "on this day" format adds a layer of nostalgia and personal reflection that can resonate with viewers.

Summary

The creator expresses disbelief and frustration about a past relationship, referencing a time they were deceived. They recount the emotional pain caused and sarcastically question the actions of their ex-partner, Jody, before ultimately stating they received a trip to the clinic instead of what they desired.

Structure

1Expressing disbelief about a past situation
2Recounting emotional pain and betrayal
3Sarcastic questioning of the ex-partner's actions
4Revealing the disappointing outcome (trip to the clinic)
5Demanding change

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ON THIS DAY Aug 12, 2022

Transcript

What is this doing in my car? Hello? Could I get the food? I can't believe I fell for all that shit you was talking about the other night. How about how you gonna do right by me and Joe Joe? How you not gonna cheat no more? How you not gonna hurt me? You breaking my heart, stepping on it and shit. What is all of that, Jody? Huh? I'm right on the money. Give me my change. This is bullshit. Get the food. Thank you so much. Oh, thank you so much. You being funny? Mmm. Okay. Trojan, very sensitive. Lubricated. America's number one condom. Where at least you went all out. All I get is a trip to the clinic. Give me my change.