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gasps DEEP POCKETS!!!
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The post uses humor and relatable character interactions to create an engaging narrative. The "slideshow" format allows for a sequential reveal of the story, keeping the viewer swiping through to see the resolution of the playful conflict between the characters.
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A koala character named Buster is teased by Ella before a photoshoot, leading to a playful chase. Buster is initially embarrassed to be in his pajamas but eventually chases after Ella when she suggests a different approach for the shoot.
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- 1Ella teases Buster about his "deep pockets" (pajamas).
- 2Buster is embarrassed and asks Ella not to judge him.
- 3Buster tries to compose himself, saying he's good now.
- 4Ella suggests getting Buster's shot done so she can finish her "masterpiece."
- 5Buster questions if he's supposed to be in his pajamas for the shoot.
- 6Ella reveals she has other ideas but doesn't want her lens to break.
- 7Ella playfully teases Buster, who reacts with mock outrage.
- 8Ella chases Buster, telling him to get back.
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Finally done with this mini comic of Buster and Ella (my oc). Ella likes to tease Buster before a shoot cause then he forgets what he signed up for. Though he does get her back one way or another 😋 #canonxoc #minicomic #bustermoon #halloweenlook
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