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Thinking you're the first one in the office, but there's always that one coworker
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Why it worked
The video uses a relatable office scenario and humor to connect with viewers, particularly those in corporate environments. The text overlay clearly communicates the joke, making it easily digestible and shareable.
Summary
The video shows someone arriving at the office, seemingly thinking they are the first one there. However, another coworker is already present and working at their desk, humorously subverting the expectation of being the first to arrive.
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Arriving to work first is a race I’m not winning #corporategirlies #corporate #marketing #office #workbestie #socialmedia #socialmediamanager #coworker #
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