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@walorzadam
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Why it worked
The video uses a common, relatable experience (nearly hitting your head) and a moment of suspense (the lowering bar) to create a short, engaging clip.
Summary
A man narrowly avoids hitting his head on a parking garage clearance bar. He walks under it, then ducks at the last second as it lowers.
Structure
- 1Man walks towards parking garage
- 2Clearance bar is visible
- 3Man ducks under the bar
- 4Bar lowers as he passes
On-screen text
CLEARANCE
6'-2"
ENTER
AFTER YOU PARK TAKE YOUR TICKET WITH YOU
AND PAY BEFORE RETURNING TO YOUR CAR
PARK
SPEED LIMIT
5
WARNING
THIS PROPERTY IS PROTECTED BY
VIDEO SURVEILLANCE AND
ELECTRONIC MONITORING
ANY TRESPASSING WILL BE
PROSECUTED TO THE FULLEST
EXTENT OF THE LAW
DO NOT ENTER
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