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@lumoscrafter

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SoundTikTok sound · Stress, tension, suspense, mystery

Why it worked

The creator's relatable struggle with letting their hair grow out, combined with the upcoming event (wedding) that necessitates a change, creates a narrative arc that resonates with viewers. The use of humor and expressive facial reactions adds to the engagement.

Summary

The creator decides to get a haircut because their hair has grown out significantly over the past few years. They are a groomsman in a wedding next weekend and want to look presentable for the photos.

Structure

1Introduction and reason for haircut
2Wedding commitment and need for a trim
3Going to get the haircut
4Post-haircut reflection (implied)
5Concluding thoughts on wedding photos

On-screen text

Haircut!!!! #haircut #mlm #glowdown #fashion idk

Transcript

Hey guys Today we're getting a haircut because this is the longest my hair has been in like maybe three or four years. I don't know why. I just let it grow out. But next weekend I'm a groomsman in a wedding and there's gonna be a lot of photos. So I need to look a little prim and proper. So yeah, let's go. Hopefully I don't spend $30 to get the tutorial like before and after. But we'll see. I'm holding out hope. Well, I don't have a single positive thing to say about this. So if I could turn back time, yes, I'll see you in the wedding photos.