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My wife and I have worked our absolute asses off

@areece95

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Why it worked

The creator taps into a relatable desire for family experiences and a much-needed vacation after hard work. The direct ask for advice encourages engagement and community participation.

Summary

The creator is excited to take his wife and son on their first family vacation to the beach, as neither has seen the ocean before. He is asking for recommendations on what to pack and what activities to do, as it has been over 15 years since his last beach trip.

Structure

1Excited for family vacation
2Wife and son's first time seeing the ocean
3Asking for beach tips and recommendations
4Creator hasn't been to the beach in 15 years

Product placement

Enterprise (car rental company) - appears as a sign on a building. Removing it would not change what happens in the video.

Call to action

Let me know all the beach chips, all the beach stuff. Let me know what are the things we need to take along with us. What are some things that we should go do? Like, I need all the beach tips.

Transcript

My wife and I have worked our absolute asses off. We've worked hundreds of hours. We've done overnight jobs. We've traveled for jobs. We've stacked up jobs. We've done literally everything possible. That way we can go on our first ever family vacation. My wife and son have never seen the beach, never seen the ocean. So I'm taking them to see it. I can't wait. Uh, we have less than a week until we leave. But I need to know, like, what are the things we need to take along with us? What are some things that we should go do? Like, I need all the beach tips. It's been over 15 years since I've been to the beach. So like, all of the beach stuff.

Original caption

I’m so excited to see my wife and sons reaction to seeing the ocean with their own eyes for the first time, ever #vaca #ocean #beach #family #fyp