Police have just confirmed that two kids,

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Two young boys, both under the age of 10, stole their parents' car and crashed it, critically injuring a pedestrian. The incident involved a collision with another vehicle before the car ended up on the sidewalk.

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#BREAKING: Two Oakland boys under the age of 10 allegedly stole a parent's car before losing control, hitting another vehicle, and then hitting a woman walking her dog, who is in critical condition, police say. More at the link in bio. #oakland #crash #opd #pedestrian #abc7news