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I'M NOT GOING TO SHOW THIS

@whatmandi

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Why it worked

The creator uses a relatable parenting concern (child safety at the beach) and personal anecdotes to create engaging content. The visual element of the beach and the creator's direct address to the audience contribute to the relatability and emotional connection.

Summary

The creator is at the beach and expresses concern about children's safety near the water. She highlights how the distance from the houses to the water and the presence of sand dunes can obscure visibility, making it difficult to supervise children effectively. She emphasizes the importance of parental vigilance to prevent accidents.

Structure

1Creator expresses concern about children's safety at the beach.
2She points out the distance from the houses to the water and the sand dunes obstructing the view.
3She explains how children can easily wander into the water unnoticed.
4She shares a personal anecdote about her own children and the ocean.
5She stresses the importance of parents being overprotective rather than underprotective.

On-screen text

I'M NOT GOING TO SHOW THIS KID, UH, HER FAMILY, I I'M MOSTLY NOT HER FAMILY BECAUSE WHERE THE FUCK ARE THEY? OKAY, SHE'S MAYBE HOW DO YOU GIRL IS? SEVEN. THIS IS WHAT I'M LOOKING AT. OKAY? ALSO LOOKING AT 8 YEAR OLD LITTLE GIRL WITH A 6 YEAR OLD BROTHER AND A LOOKING 2 YEAR OLD COUSIN? WHAT? WHERE ARE YOUR PARENTS? YOUR PARENTS? PEOPLE STOP AND ASK THEM ON THEIR MORNING WALK, PARENTS? AND THEY'VE POINT UP, HOUSE. HMM. HMM. HMM. THIS BEACH, ASS LIKE GUIDE ON WHAT TO GET CAUGHT IN AND ALSO MAYBE GUIDE ON HOW TO FUCKING PROPERLY PARENT YOUR CHILDREN. WHAT ARE YOU DOING? YEAH, OKAY, YOU JUST WANNA GO DOWN AND DIG FOR SEASHELLS. EVEN SITTING RIGHT CHAIR WHERE THIS IS TOO FAR AWAY FOR ME AND THAT IS EXTREME, BUT LET ME, JUST WALK IT. I DON'T LIKE IS THAT I CAN'T SEE OVER THIS LITTLE HUMP OKAY, BUT THIS IS, THE DAMN CHAIRS. HOW FAR AWAY THE HOUSES ARE. UH, UH, UH, UH, UH, UH, NO, FUCKING CUT IT FROM THOSE CHAIRS. YOU CAN'T SEE HUMP RIGHT HERE. IS, IS THAT THEY'RE PROBABLY LIKE, COLLECT SEASHELLS. BUSY, SHE'S DOING OKAY, THAT SOUNDS GOOD, BUT KIDS ARE CURIOUS AS FUCK. THEY'LL WALK RIGHT FUCK INTO THAT OCEAN TO GET I DID, AND OLD. AND MAYBE THEY'RE GONNA STAND RIGHT A WAVE COMES, THEY GET CAUGHT THAT'S HOW THAT AND I KNOW THAT SOME PEOPLE MIGHT THINK THAT'S TOO OVERPROTECTIVE, BUT I WOULD RATHER BE OVERPROTECTIVE THAN UNDERPROTECTIVE. AND SOMETHING HAPPENED TO MY FUCKING PLEASE WATCH YOUR FUCKING KIDS. NEAR AROUND IN WATER. PLEASE. I COULDN'T BELIEVE MY EYES THIS IS UNACCEPTABLE THEY CAN'T SEE FROM DOWN HERE. SENDING THE BABY OUT.

Original caption

I am unwell. I put a clip at the end without showing the kids faces so you could see how far the house is from the water and kids. #watersafety #dobetter #parenting101