the motherhood poem that left me sobbing:

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The post likely resonated with viewers due to its emotional and relatable theme of motherhood, tapping into shared experiences and feelings about family and the passage of time.

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This TikTok post features a photo of a mother and child, followed by a poem titled "Elsewhere" by Jessica Jocelyn. The poem reflects on the desire to be present for children throughout their lives, from infancy to old age, and the profound, unending nature of motherhood.

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1Mother and child photo
2Poem title and author
3Poem verses about lifelong motherhood
4Concluding reflection on being a mother

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the motherhood poem that left me sobbing: Elsewhere - Jessica Jocelyn Lord, let me live to 120. One day, my children will need someone to bathe them and put them to bed again. To help them eat and soothe them to sleep. They will become old and gray and deep wrinkles will line their faces. I want to be there like I was in the beginning, brushing their hair and pulling the blankets over their shoulders. Lord, let me live to 120. Because I will never be finished being their mother.

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