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College Freshmen listen up !!!!

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Why it worked

The creator uses a relatable and humorous approach to address a common concern among college freshmen: fitting in and making a good impression through fashion. The direct, no-nonsense advice, delivered with a touch of humor, resonates with the target audience.

Summary

The creator advises college freshmen against wearing elaborate outfits every day, arguing that most people don't care and it can lead to discomfort and self-consciousness. They suggest a more casual approach to clothing as the college experience progresses.

Structure

1Address college freshmen
2Advise against daily elaborate outfits
3Explain why no one cares about fits
4Describe the discomfort of wearing fits in heat
5Suggest a more casual approach

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College Freshmen listen up !!!!

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You are a freshman going to college please listen up, listen close and listen carefully. Do not and I repeat do not pull up to college wearing fits every single day. I promise you nobody cares. I'm not trying to be mean or disrespectful but there's too many things going on in the average person's mind that goes to college for them to care about your fit. Stop you'll be like yo your fit tough, bro. On top of that by the second semester you're gonna be red out of fits by the third semester you're gonna be tired of putting on fits. I used to be that person that would wear fits every day. I'm talking varsity jackets, graphic tees, hoodies, everything, cargo pants. I got so tired of wearing fits, especially when it's hot. You're gonna start sweating in your fits, and you're gonna be stinky in front of the college. Please, like you're literally gonna be wearing a white t-shirt and gray sweats. But hey, if you still want to put on a fit, you do you.