The only excuse I will accept for you not attending a builder summit is if you get hit by a car.

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A business coach for builders uses a humorous hook to encourage viewers to sign up for his upcoming Builders Summit event. He outlines the key topics he will cover, including client acquisition and business systems, and directs viewers to his link in bio for tickets.

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Don't get hit with regret! The Builders Summit is only a few weeks away! I'll be teaching you proven strategies to qualify and attract high quality, high paying clients and elevate your business to all new levels! 🏛️ Melbourne and Sydney 📅 2nd & 4th September 2025 📍Bells Hotel South Melbourne 📍Club Parramatta 🎟️ Link in Bio for Tickets! See you there! #construction #builder #business #success #georgepassas