WE FOUND A SNAKE

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Promoted product

Liquid Fence Snake Repellent

Why it worked

The video uses a common fear (snakes) and a relatable situation (pool maintenance) to create a hook. The creator's initial 'mistake' and subsequent solution with a specific product provides a clear narrative arc and demonstrates the product's use case effectively.

Summary

The creator initially put pine straw around their above-ground pool, but was told it would attract snakes. They then removed the pine straw and applied Liquid Fence Snake Repellent around the pool and fence line to deter snakes.

Structure

1Shows pine straw around the pool and states people are calling her crazy for it.
2Explains she thought it was smart but was told it attracts snakes.
3Shows snake repellent and states she's not playing around with snakes.
4Applies the snake repellent around the pool and fence line.
5

Original caption

We found a SNAKE by our pool. #pooltok #poolmaintenance #abovegroundpool #backyardmakeover #pool JK 😂it's was a PRANK!

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Product placement

Liquid Fence Snake Repellent (Granular): This product is used to repel snakes. It is applied around the pool and fence line. Removing it would mean the product is not used to deter snakes. Bestway Power Steel: This is the brand of the above-ground pool. It appears as a watermark on the side of the pool. Removing it would not change what happens in the video.

On-screen text

WE FOUND A SNAKE EVERYBODY IS CALLING ME CRAZY BECAUSE I PUT PINE STRAW AROUND MY POOL I THOUGHT I WAS BEING SMART BY PUTTING PINE STRAW AROUND MY POOL BUT EVERYBODY IS TELLING ME THAT I CREATED A BREEDING GROUND FOR SNAKES NOW Y'ALL MAY CALL ME CRAZY BUT ONE THING I'M NOT ABOUT TO DO IS PLAY AROUND WITH NO SNAKES SO I GOT THIS SNAKE REPELLENT TO PUT DOWN AROUND THE POOL AND THE FENCE LINE NOW I GOTTA PULL BACK ALL THIS STRAW AND WE GONNA PUT DOWN SOME REPELS-ALL AND THEN WE'RE GONNA PUT DOWN SOME SNAKE REPELLENT DYLAN WHAT DYLAN WHERE'S THE SNAKE DYLAN DYLAN GET IT GET IT NO NO NO NO NO GET IT OH MY GOD BRO MY GOD BRO MY GOD

Transcript

WE FOUND A SNAKE (Sound of raking) EVERYBODY IS CALLING ME CRAZY BECAUSE I PUT PINE STRAW AROUND MY POOL I THOUGHT I WAS BEING SMART BY PUTTING PINE STRAW AROUND MY POOL BUT EVERYBODY IS TELLING ME THAT I CREATED A BREEDING GROUND FOR SNAKES NOW Y'ALL MAY CALL ME CRAZY BUT ONE THING I'M NOT ABOUT TO DO IS PLAY AROUND WITH NO SNAKES SO I GOT THIS SNAKE REPELLENT TO PUT DOWN AROUND THE POOL AND THE FENCE LINE NOW I GOTTA PULL BACK ALL THIS STRAW AND WE GONNA PUT DOWN SOME REPELS-ALL AND THEN WE'RE GONNA PUT DOWN SOME SNAKE REPELLENT DYLAN WHAT DYLAN WHERE'S THE SNAKE DYLAN DYLAN GET IT GET IT NO NO NO NO NO GET IT OH MY GOD BRO MY GOD BRO MY GOD