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The Next Goal: 98+ Average!
@islandock1
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Why it worked
The video taps into the relatable desire for academic achievement and the excitement of receiving rewards. The creator's positive reinforcement and the visual of students getting money and snacks create an engaging and motivating narrative.
Summary
The video features students showing off their report cards, with the creator motivating them to achieve a 98+ average by offering them $100 if they succeed. The students are then shown purchasing snacks with the money.
Structure
- 1Students show report cards
- 2Creator motivates students to aim for 98+ average
- 3Students receive $100 for achieving the goal
- 4Students buy snacks with the money
On-screen text
The Next Goal: 98+ Average!
Transcript
Let's go! What's your name, bro? My name is Dennis. I gotta go to Curtis, yeah. Okay, Dennis. Let me show you my grade right here. Let's go. What grade? 11th. I go to IB. I'm an IB student. Nice man. 93 average. Let's go. Good grades, man. Keep up the hard work. Hold on. Let me see what's your name? My name is Diego. Diego, what grade? 11th. Yeah. I go to Curtis. 88.08% Nice man. Diego. If you get a 90 plus average, you get $100. Oh, all right. Yeah. All right. I'll make sure you try hard. And there is there is a wall outside, the Hall of Fame wall. That wall. If you stick consistent through the whole year. With the 90 plus average, your name gonna be there at the end of the year. All right. So you got to push it. Yeah. Push that grade. All right. Jay, and Dennis, you both get $100 each. Because you got the 90 plus average. Thanks. All right. Yeah, you get to grab it if you want. Go ahead, grab it. Come on, Jay, come on, Jay, let's go, Jay. Good job, man. Good job with your grades. Keep up the hard work. Welcome. Go Dennis. Yeah, go. Is that enough? Yeah, go. Diego, I need you to push it. Yeah. 90 plus, okay? I'll do it. All right.
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Great report cards today, but the mission isn’t over! Their next goal is to come back with 98+ averages. We believe in them! Show them some love in the comments and help motivate them to reach that next level. Let’s go! #islandockzacksfinestgradesforgrabs #deliockyfoodnyccommunity #schoolkidsreportcards #highschoolkids #viral
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