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omg my first ever ironman 70.3 yay surely the swim can't be that bad!!
@w1nnerae
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Why it worked
The video uses relatable humor by contrasting the initial optimism about the swim with the reality of rough ocean conditions, creating a humorous and engaging narrative.
Summary
The video shows participants at the start of an Ironman 70.3 race, with the creator humorously questioning if the swim portion will be difficult. It then cuts to the actual swim, revealing choppy waters and waves, implying the swim is indeed challenging.
Structure
- 1Excitement at the start of Ironman 70.3
- 2Creator's optimistic (and naive) comment about the swim
- 3Transition to the challenging swim conditions
- 4Participants entering rough waters
Product placement
Ironman 70.3 ACTS - it is the name of the event being competed in. Removing it would change what happens in the video.
ROKA APPEARS - it is a brand logo visible on the archway. Removing it would not change what happens in the video.
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omg my first ever ironman 70.3 yay surely the swim can't be that bad!!
the swim in question:
Transcript
omg my first ever ironman 70.3 yay surely the swim can't be that bad!! the swim in question:
Original caption
surfs up here at desaru coast ironman 70.3 🤙🏻🌊🏄♂️🤿 #ironman703 #desarucoast #ironman #triathlon
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