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Taking my niece to Great America (except I get kicked out after first ride)

@abbybaffoe

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Why it worked

The creator uses a relatable and humorous premise of being kicked out of an amusement park for a minor infraction, which creates intrigue and encourages viewers to watch to find out what happened.

Summary

The creator takes her niece to Six Flags Great America for a day of fun before school starts. However, she is kicked out of the park after filming a short clip on a ride, leading to her and her family being escorted out.

Structure

1Arriving at Six Flags Great America
2Taking a ride with niece
3Getting kicked out for filming
4Being escorted out of the park

Product placement

Great America: an amusement park where people go on rides. It appears on screen and is the location of the video. Removing it would change what happens in the video. Six Flags: an amusement park chain. It is mentioned as the location of the video. Removing it would change what happens in the video.

On-screen text

Taking my niece to Great America (except I get kicked out after first ride) The 5 second clip that got me kicked out The 5 second clip that got me kicked out

Transcript

My little niece is about to head back to school and before she goes back to school all she wanted to do was go to Six Flags Great America. So that's where we are. She's so excited. I'm actually excited. I haven't been here in so long. I feel like. Oh my gosh. So we're going on our first ride. Are you excited or scared? Excited. Okay. Here we go. There we go. That's getting kicked out because I had my phone out on that ride. We're literally being escorted out of the park. Okay.

Original caption

Spent hundreds to get in and was kicked out in 20 mins 😭😩😂 I’ll never make that mistake again lol, def a safety hazard 😅 thankfully my mom and char stayed and I went shopping hahahaha