THIS PUPPY WAS

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The video taps into the strong emotional appeal of animal rescue, combined with the relatable struggle of navigating difficult terrain and the heartwarming resolution of saving a lost puppy.

Summary

The creator recounts finding a puppy alone in a field, crying for its mother. After a difficult trek across fences and through crops, the creator rescued the puppy and decided to name him Bane.

Structure

1Finding the puppy alone and distressed
2The difficult journey to reach the puppy
3Rescuing the puppy and naming him
4The arduous walk back with the puppy

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THIS PUPPY WAS MIDDLE OF THIS FIELD, HOLLERING AND WHINING AND YELPING. A STICK WITH CRYING FOR HIS MOTHER. I WALKED. DOWN THERE? MY HOUSE IS WHERE THAT RED ROOF IS. I'VE CROSSED TWO BARBED WIRE FENCES CAUSE I HEARD HIM DOWN HERE YELPING! WE HEARD HIM HE'S NOT HERE. GOD KNOWS HOW LONG. JUST CRYING FOR HIS MOTHER. HIS MOTHER CAME, HUH? I RESCUED YOU. HE COME RUNNING TO ME. MWAH! SO MUCH. HE'S A LITTLE BOY. GONNA NAME HIM BANE. HER NAME IS BANE. CAUSE THESE ARE SLEDGEHAMMERS. YES. I'M OUT OF BREATH. SLEDGEHAMMERS A WALK THROUGH. THIS IS A LEG WORKOUT OF A DECADE. LET ME JUST TELL YOU THAT. WE DON'T GET CAUGHT. UGH! UGH! WE'RE GONNA GET OUT HERE. WE'RE FOR A MINUTE, HONEY. UGH! UGH!

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Puppy rescue my fiance might really leave me for all the animal rescue missions I’ve undertaken I told him I was going to the store for rice I came back with Bean 💕

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this puppy was middle of this field, hollerin' and whinin' and yelpin'. a stick with crying for his mother. I walked. down there? My house is where that red roof is. I've crossed two barbed wire fences 'cause I heard him down here yelpin! we heard him he's not here. God knows how long. just cryin' for his mother. his mother came, huh? I rescued you. he come runnin' to me. Mwah! so much. He's a little boy. gonna name him Bane. Her name is Bane. 'cause these are sledgehammers. Yes. I'm out of breath. Sledgehammers are a walk through. this is a leg workout of a decade. let me just tell you that. we don't get caught. Ugh! Ugh! We're gonna get out here. We're for a minute, honey. Ugh! Ugh!