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HE'S TIRED. TOLD
@stormiemakenzie
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Why it worked
The video likely resonated due to the relatable humor of a creator getting into a silly situation and the heartwarming interaction with a puppy. The creator's candid and slightly mischievous tone, combined with the unexpected setting, creates an engaging narrative.
Summary
The creator is in a field of soybeans with a puppy, lamenting that she told her fiancé she was going to the store but is actually out in the field. She gives the puppy water and expresses that she can't keep him, joking about him having herpes.
Structure
- 1Creator is in a field of soybeans with a puppy.
- 2She explains she lied to her fiancé about going to the store.
- 3She gives the puppy water and expresses affection.
- 4She decides she cannot keep the puppy.
- 5She makes a joke about the puppy having herpes.
On-screen text
HE'S TIRED. TOLD
MY FIANCE I
WAS GOING TO
THE STORE TO
IF HE CHECKS
MY 360
AND SEES THAT
I AM IN
THE BACK FIELD
BEHIND THE HOUSE
THAT DON'T BELONG
TO US, IN
THE MIDDLE OF
SOME SOYBEANS.
HUH? HE'S GONNA
HAVE SOME QUESTIONS.
WHAT'S THE BEST
WAY TO GET
YOU HOME,
HUH?
LOOK HOW TIRED
HE IS.
YOU WANT SOME
WATER?
I NEED SOME
WATER.
OH, THAT'S SO
GOOD STUFF. HUH?
AFTER I FLATTERED
HIM, I DIDN'T
MEAN TO BE
THAT MEAN.
THERE YOU GO.
HOW LONG HAVE I
BEEN OUT HERE?
I SHOULD HAVE
TAKEN VIDEOS OF
BUT I WAS
JUST IN TOO
BIG OF A HURRY TO GET
OUT HERE TO
FIND HIM.
THAT I WAS
ON FACETIME WITH
MY MAMA,
TALKING, LIKE,
WHAT DO I
DO? AND SHE
WAS LIKE,
JUST GO FIND
HIM. LOOK HOW
PRETTY.
OH, I NEED
TO REHOME HIM,
I CAN'T KEEP
HIM. BANE.
I HOPE YOU
DON'T HAVE HERPES.
AH, YOU ARE
PERFECT.
I JUST WANT
YOU TO KNOW
THAT.
Original caption
I forgot I took this clip of us taking a break once we got out of the (sledgehammers) Soybeans they were up to my chest it’s like wading through water full body workout in 90+ degree weather and it was humid anyways I’ll call animal control as soon as they open and share that convo
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