so i got into these top schools...

@dreamych3line

2.0K followers · usually 3.2K views a post

Views

31.4K

Likes

3.0K

Comments

15

Shares

50

SoundTikTok sound · ribs x for real this time mashup

Promoted product

college admissions consultinghttps://www.instagram.com/dreamych3line/ ↗

Why it worked

The creator leverages a compelling personal narrative of overcoming challenges and achieving significant success in both academics and activism. This builds trust and relatability, making their offer of help with college admissions feel authentic and valuable.

Summary

The creator shares their journey of getting into top universities, running a successful youth nonprofit, becoming an award-winning activist, and speaking globally. They acknowledge the challenges but highlight the people who made it worthwhile, ultimately offering their help with college admissions and making a difference.

Structure

1Accepted into top schools
2Ran a successful youth nonprofit
3Became an award-winning activist
4Spoken to thousands globally
5Championed millions for communities
6It was hard, but people made it worth it

Original caption

a little bit of my story…let me help you find yours :) #fyp #collegeapps #collegeessays #nonprofit #highschool

More from @dreamych3line

Product placement

The creator is promoting their own services as a college admissions consultant, leveraging their personal achievements as social proof. The Instagram profile link is provided as the contact point.

Call to action

DM me if you want help on anything college admissions related, or making a difference in your community.

On-screen text

so i got into these top schools... run one of the most successful youth nonprofit social justice organizations in the nation... became an award-winning activist honored by Harvard, Princeton, members of Congress, US Department of State, leaders/CEOs across Europe, Governor Gavin Newsom, the United Nations, global NGOs, & international nonprofits spoken to thousands of people all over the world 🌍 championed millions of dollars for communities in need... while balancing school, work, family, relationships... it got hard sometimes 💀 but there were people who made it worth it. i committed to Stanford University as a first generation low income college student 🌲❤️ for the longest time, i had ZERO idea what i was doing, no one to guide me... so i want to help you too. if you want help on anything college admissions related, or making a difference in your community, DM me :) i got you