No matter my facial expression, I used to have sad and tired eyes

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Soft Rebuild Journal https://linktr.ee/periswangui ↗

Why it worked

The video uses a relatable narrative of overcoming hardship and personal transformation, which resonates with viewers. The "before and after" visual contrast, coupled with the emotional journey, creates a compelling and inspiring story that likely drove engagement.

Summary

The creator shares her journey of overcoming sadness and loneliness after a period of isolation. She introduces her "Soft Rebuild Journal" as a space where she discusses rebuilding after trauma, highlighting how her eyes have become brighter and she is happier since embracing this new chapter.

Structure

1Expressing past sadness and tired eyes due to isolation and loneliness.
2Introducing the "Soft Rebuild Journal" for rebuilding after trauma.
3Describing past isolation, loneliness, and lack of community.
4Making a promise to live loudly again.
5Sharing the positive changes: brighter eyes and increased happiness.

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The video promotes the creator's "Soft Rebuild Journal" which is a course or guide about rebuilding after trauma.

Original caption

When you’ve lived through isolation, constant grief and loneliness - sadness slowly creeps into your eyes. That on top of two pregnancies and post partum journeys, constant criticism of your character and emotional and psychological abuse... It's been such a blessing to experience real love, freedom, reconnection, travel and joy in so many different ways. It's slowly edging out the years of pain in my eyes. #HealingJourney #GlowUpJourney #FromPainToPeace #WomanInProgress #NewBeginnings

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No matter my facial expression, I used to have sad and tired eyes this was me after long term isolation and loneliness Soft Rebuild what's up this is my soft rebuild journal where I talk about rebuilding after trauma I spent years isolated in a small town far from family and friends working from home having two babies back to back with no community so when I got out a promise I'm going to live loudly again I'm going to live loudly again since then my eyes have become brighter and I'm a lot happier my eyes have become brighter and I'm a lot happier I'd say the eyes have it

Transcript

No matter my facial expression, I used to have sad and tired eyes. This was me after long term isolation and loneliness. This was me after long term isolation and loneliness. So when I got out I made myself a promise. I'm going to live loudly again. I'm going to live loudly again. Since then my eyes have become brighter and I'm a lot happier. My eyes have become brighter and I'm a lot happier. I'd say the eyes have it.