The video likely worked due to its relatable and humorous on-screen text, which plays on the common experience of poor lighting in event venues. The dramatic shift in lighting also creates a visually engaging moment.
Summary
The video shows a dimly lit room with tables covered in fabric, possibly set up for an event. The lighting shifts to a bright yellow-green, illuminating the room and revealing more details of the setup and some people in the background. The on-screen text is a comment from a user saying they can't see anything.
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Transcript, structure and on-screen text
5 beats and 1 lines of on-screen text — the parts you need to write your own version.