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I don't like how I look
@jackedurden
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Why it worked
The video uses a relatable self-deprecating humor and a surprising punchline to connect with viewers. The visual transformation combined with the unexpected reveal of 'unemployment' as the cause of dissatisfaction creates a memorable and shareable moment.
Summary
The creator expresses dissatisfaction with their appearance, considering a buzz cut and bulking up. They then question why these changes didn't lead to a better look, before realizing the true reason is unemployment.
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