This message is for Shelby Sapp....

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The video leverages a direct, personalized approach by addressing a specific individual, Shelby Sapp, and referencing a shared context ('Girl day two. Women and wealth.'). This creates a sense of exclusivity and relevance, making the pitch more compelling than a generic advertisement. The creator also builds credibility by mentioning high-profile collaborations, which strengthens the perceived value of her expertise.

Summary

The creator is pitching to Shelby Sapp, offering to speak to her sales team about personal branding. She highlights her experience and expertise in the field, suggesting she can provide a blueprint for connecting with audiences online through content creation and visibility.

Structure

1Introduction and direct address to Shelby Sapp
2Context of meeting and current event (Women and Wealth)
3Introduction of self as a personal brand strategist and speaker
4Mention of past high-profile collaborations
5Proposal to speak at Shelby's event next year

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@shelby haas send me a private dm I would love to chat about speaking to your girls about personal brand 🫶😎#womenandwealth #womeninbusiness #shelbysapp #salestok

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The creator is promoting her services as a personal brand strategist and keynote speaker, offering to provide a blueprint for connecting with audiences online through content creation and visibility. This is presented as a course or coaching service.

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So if you're open to the conversation, I would love to talk to you, and I would love to do this with you.

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This message is for Shelby Sapp.... This video is for a Shelby Sapp and Shelby only. I just met you a few minutes ago. Girl day two. Women and wealth. Having the best time of my life. But this is my formal pitch to you. I'm a personal brand strategist and keynote speaker. I'm out of Scottsdale, Arizona. Yay, Arizona! I've worked with people like Ryan Seacrest. I put on events with Gary V, Elena Cardone, Jesse Itzler, you name it. But I would love the opportunity, cause I know you're gonna do this next year to speak at your event next year, but for now, I would love to come in and talk to your sales girls about personal branding. I know you're the queen of personal branding, but let me give another perspective. Let me empower. Let me give the blueprint on how to connect better with your audience online through content creation and help pour into them of how important it is to have visibility online. So if you're open to the conversation, I would love to talk to you, and I would love to do this with you.

Transcript

This message is for Shelby Sapp.... This video is for a Shelby Sapp and Shelby only. I just met you a few minutes ago. Girl day two. Women and wealth. Having the best time of my life. But this is my formal pitch to you. I'm a personal brand strategist and keynote speaker. I'm out of Scottsdale, Arizona. Yay, Arizona! I've worked with people like Ryan Seacrest. I put on events with Gary V, Elena Cardone, Jesse Itzler, you name it. But I would love the opportunity cause I know you're gonna do this next year to speak at your event next year, but for now, I would love to come in and talk to your sales girls about personal branding. I know you're the queen of personal branding, but let me give another perspective. Let me empower. Let me give the blueprint on how to connect better with your audience online through content creation and help pour into them of how important it is to have visibility online. So if you're open to the conversation, I would love to talk to you, and I would love to do this with you.