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Someone at my dad's dialysis center was found dead in her car
@saharramm
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The video likely resonated due to its emotional storytelling, highlighting a serious medical concern with personal stakes. The creator's raw emotion and direct address to the audience about patient safety and potential negligence likely drove engagement and shares.
Summary
A woman shares her distress and anger after a death and multiple hospitalizations occurred at her father's dialysis center, suggesting negligence due to understaffing. She recounts her father's own frightening experience with a similar condition and emphasizes the importance of attentive medical care and listening to one's body.
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DaVita dialysis center in Novi is currently closed because 4 people have been hospitalized and 1 found passed away in their car outside the clinic center. My dad was recently admitted in a. Fib with RVR and has a pending outpatient watchman procedure — prayers are so welcomed please. I’m at a loss for words and only have one purpose with this post. Bringing more media attention and awareness to negligence DaVita has towards their vulnerable dialysis patients. The more awareness that’s spread, the more pressure CEOs will have on conducting a more ethical business. I fear for my dads safety and the safety of many others who use DaVita clinics in general. Poor hygiene, water, and unsafe working conditions are unacceptable. #davitadialysis #dialysis #hemodialysis #kidneytransplant #fyp @wearfigs @WXYZ Detroit @Fox News @Detroit Lions @Detroit Free Press @The Detroit News @Detroit Tigers @gretchenwhitmermi @Abdul El-Sayed @Smileys Spuds & Corn
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