Reading the Common App essay that got me into Harvard and Stanford

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The video taps into the aspiration of college admissions success by sharing a personal essay that was instrumental in gaining admission to top universities. This relatable content, combined with the creator's personal reflection, likely resonated with viewers interested in college applications and personal development.

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The creator shares the beginning and end of her Common App essay that helped her get into Harvard and Stanford. She reflects on how her essay demonstrated personal growth and a shift from hiding to advocating for causes she cares about.

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Just wanted to share the beginning + end to depict how I utilized a metaphor to explain my biggest EC in high school :) #harvard #stanford #commonapp #essayadvice #ivyleague