Why it worked
The video provides actionable, concise advice on resume optimization, directly addressing a common concern (ageism) with a clear 'before and after' demonstration. The quick, step-by-step format makes the information easily digestible and shareable.
Summary
The video demonstrates how to update a resume for a 50-year-old professional to make it appear more current and appealing to employers. It focuses on removing outdated information like graduation dates and long tenure, and updating skill sections to include modern technical skills and keywords like "strategic transformation leader."
Structure
- 1Introduce the goal: de-age a 50-year-old resume.
- 2Identify and remove outdated information (graduation date, excessive experience).
- 3Update skills section with technical skills and modern keywords.
- 4Reframe summary with stronger, more relevant language.
- 5Address collaboration and remove formatting errors.
On-screen text
De-Aging a 50-Year-Old's Resume
I'M GONNA MAKE
OLD RESUME LOOK
LIKE THEY'RE 40
IN 30 SECONDS.
SO THIS PERSON
IS GIVING AWAY
THEIR AGE IN THREE PLACES
WE NEED TO FIX.
FIRST, WE HAVE
THEIR GRADUATION DATE HERE
BYE BYE, THEY
WE ALSO HAVE
YEARS OLD
SO THAT'S GOTTA
GO ALSO HERE
GO ALSO HERE
IN THE EXPERIENCE
IN THE SUMMARY
25+ YEARS
MUCH STRONGER TO
SAY 15+ YEARS
NEXT, THEY HAVEN'T
ADDRESSED THREE KEY
SKILLS THAT PEOPLE ASSUME
OLDER PROFESSIONALS ARE
MISSING.
1. Technology
2. Change
3. COLLABORATION.
SO IN THE
KEY SKILLS SECTION
ADD A TECHNICAL
SKILLS SUB HEADING
AND INCLUDE ALL
THE SOFTWARE YOU CAN USE.
AND FINALLY, FOR
NO DOUBLE SPACES
AFTER YOUR PERIODS.