PERFECT SALES VOICEMAIL

@closingwithcoffin

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Closing with Coffin

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4 videos

Why it worked

The video uses a common sales scenario (leaving a voicemail) and presents it in a concise, engaging way with clear on-screen text. The creator's name and brand are subtly integrated, making it feel like a helpful tip rather than a hard sell, which can appeal to a sales-focused audience.

Summary

A sales coach named Mark Coffey leaves a voicemail for John, offering to send an email with insights into why he's calling. He provides a phone number and a call to action to review the information and respond.

Structure

1Introduction and purpose of call
2Offer to send an email with insights
3Call to action to review and respond
4Provide phone number
5

Original caption

#salestraining #salestok #salescoach #salestips #sellingtips

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Product placement

The video features a sales coach, Mark Coffey, promoting his services or training, likely related to sales techniques like voicemails. The creator's TikTok handle "closingwithcoffin" and the bio link further indicate the promotion of his brand/business.

Call to action

Take a look. Please let me know what you'd like to do.

On-screen text

PERFECT SALES VOICEMAIL Part 1

Transcript

John, it's Mark Coffey. I was hoping to catch up with you this afternoon. I'll tell you what. I'll send you an email to give you a little bit of insight as to why I'm calling. Take a look. Please let me know what you'd like to do. Um, telephone number 444444444. I'll talk to you soon. Take care.