The video taps into the common aspiration of small brands wanting to be stocked in major retailers, creating a relatable narrative of ambition and the 'underdog' journey. The 'cold pitch' element adds an element of risk and suspense, making viewers invested in the outcome.
Summary
The creator is making a pitch deck to get their product, Poom, into Olive Young. They are sending the pitch deck cold and asking for good luck.
Structure
1Expressing desire for Poom to be in Olive Young
2Announcing the creation of a pitch deck
3Sending the pitch deck cold
4Asking for good luck
Product placement
Original caption
If anyone from Olive Young is seeing this… hi 👋😭 @OLIVE YOUNG US #oliveyoung #poom #koreanmakeup #manifesting #buildinginpublic
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Poom (brand name, ACTS - it is the product being pitched to Olive Young, removing it would change the video's purpose)
Olive Young (brand name, ACTS - it is the target retailer being pitched to, removing it would change the video's purpose)
On-screen text
Poom
X
OLIVE
YOUNG
You guys, I really want
Poom in Olive Young. So
I'm making a pitch deck
and sending it COLD. Wish
me luck everyone 😭
Transcript
So your luck everyone
I can not give you everything
just like I know you should
I can not give you everything
just like I know you should