I had ACL surgery last week in five days and I made a video talking about how I was experiencing really bad caff pain and somebody DM me who was a medical student and said not to alarm you but that could be cause for concern and if it persists you should definitely contact your doctor.
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The video shares a personal health scare that could happen to anyone, creating a sense of relatability and urgency. The narrative arc, from initial dismissal to serious diagnosis, engages the viewer and highlights the importance of listening to one's body and seeking medical advice.
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The creator describes experiencing severe calf pain after ACL surgery, which was initially dismissed but later diagnosed as a blood clot after a medical student's DM prompted them to seek further medical attention. The pain is most intense when walking, but the creator is now on a higher dose of blood thinner and hopes the medication will help.
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